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老外帮忙写的外贸开发信  

2010-12-31 11:53:04|  分类: 外贸分享 |  标签: |举报 |字号 订阅

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             老外帮忙写的外贸开发信

 

前段时间新西兰地震,他们将大规模的重建一些基础设施, 如果是搞建筑 装修的 供应商 应该是一个很好的 向他们自荐的机会。

我是卫浴的, 碰巧在新西兰就这么一个朋友, 我写了 开发信给他看看, 他顺手帮我改了改, 不过整体感觉很冗长, anyway,  希望对大家有帮助。

如有献丑, 请见谅

Dear Sir/ Miss:

If you will excuse me a moment, I would like to introduce myself. 

My name is Bruce Washington and I work for Hangzhou Just Sanitary Ware.  

Our products range from shower rooms, shower panels to Bathroom Vanities, Jacuzzi bathtubs.

Currently we supply our shower to Poland, Italy, Ukraine and The United Kingdoms, we would really like to see if our products can interest you as well.  

What we can provide you are:  

* Good prices and outstanding quality products  

* Comparatively short timeframe  

* Warm after services

Here I am sorry that the Earthquake has pulled down a lot of buildings in your country New Zealand. But still luckily no one was killed, and I suppose that most of your houses are covered by insurance.

Now hope this could be a chance for us to bring our products to your country and help you rebuild your homes.                                                                            

Thank your for time 

Regards  

Bruce Washington  

CHONGQING GLORY TRADING

www.jacuzzi-bathtub.com

Mob: +86 15257104449

MSN:teetotal007@hotmail.com

好像感觉还可以。。

读了老外写的。。。。

Dear Sir/ Miss:

If you will excuse me a moment, I would like to introduce myself. 

My name is Bruce Washington and I work for Hangzhou Just Sanitary Ware.  

Our products range from shower room to shower panels, Jacuzzi bathtubs,  

Currently we supply our shower to Poland, Italy, Ukraine and The United Kingdoms, we would really like to see if our products can interest you as well.  

What we can provide you are:  

* Good prices and outstanding quality products  

* Comparatively short timeframe  

* Warm after services

I am very sorry that the Earthquake has pulled down a lot of buildings in your lovely city of Christchurch New Zealand. But you are so fortunate that you had no loss of lives, and I suppose that most of your houses are covered by the insurance.

Now I am hoping that we could be of great help  in supplying to your country  our products at a very good price and help reduce the cost of the rebuilding of so many of your homes which I believe there are many. China knows what it is like to have large earthquakes and the devastation it can cause , and the sorrow.  

Thanks for reading  

Regards  

Bruce Washington  

CHONGQING GLORY TRADING

www.jacuzzi-bathtub.com

Mob: +86 15257104449

MSN:teetotal007@hotmail.com

呵呵, 什么才有能力把wording 做到perfect ..let's keep trying

and hope this is a little bit helpful for you guys

 

NOW I'D  LIKE TO GIVE THANIKS FOR THIS MARSHALL GUY FROM NZ,..

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